Keyholder - Chapter OneChapter OneTwelve manuscripts later, Mulaya had it: the last remnants of a script likely written a hundred years past. No one dared to write magic like this anymore. No one tried. Except for her. Getting her fingers on this had involved more than a little rubbing of the right elbows, greasing of the right palms, and the broken heart of a wizard who lived in Yrkai creating mechanisms for little more than art. A waste of talent, in Mulaya’s opinion. He was a talented gentleman. Now, he was a sad and talented gentleman. It didn’t matter. Mulaya didn’t have room for people in her life who would only hold her back. She had goal
Why Do We Critique?Why Do We Critique People When They Just Don't Take It To Heart?This is why we critique: because for every person who goes AHH HOW DARE YOU SUGGEST MY COMMA WAS IN THE WRONG SPOT, five people learn something. We critique for the 13 year old girl who'll freak out because you dared suggest that her story was flat and she could make her story much more interesting by giving her main character personality who sends all her friends to harrass you because HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY INSULT HER STORY... you meany......And then 5 years later she's sitting in her computer chair, wondering why the hell she didn't listen and beg for more, writing critiqu
SW: WoundedWoundedA story about two Jedi and love and the dark side...RATING: PG. For action and angst.GENRE: General fantasy, drama, angst, action.Hey. Remember back then? When we used to be friends? It was really a long time ago, though. Back in the Temple. Remember?Its all right. I dont exactly expect you to remember. It was really a long time ago. You know, back when we were all made of professional, outward appearances and we strode around like the galaxy was laid bare at our feet, all cocky and so plastic. We laughed on cue, we stalked into battle on cue, we glowered down at ambassadors threatening our positionwell, you
My Homophones and IGrammer can be fun!She makes me yummy cookies.I love my Grammer!Grammar can be fun!I loves my apostrophes!And those commas too!